Why your emails are too long -- and how to improve them

Every day my colleagues and I receive hundreds of emails; as I’m sure that you do. Some are vital, others less so and many are simply irritating. Frustratingly they come in all shapes and sizes, there is no one size fits all template. Rumour has it that email is the source of, and solution to, all of life's problems.




Certainly, the modern business world could not exist without the ability to exchange messages instantly, but email also causes all sorts of communication problems. For starters, there's way too much of it. Second, much of the email we get is too long. Long email creates bottlenecks in our in-boxes and more often than not goes unread because it seems too complex.



As with all things, ask a hundred people a question and you will get a hundred answers, however, here are some of the top reasons why your mail is too long, and what you should do to change it:



You don't know exactly what you're trying to say. It’s a truism that writing more isn't going to cover up the fact that you are lacking knowledge. We also find that candidates write too much at the start of an email because they don't know how to phrase what's on their mind. I suppose that it's a form of clearing one's throat. The solution? Re-read you’re your opening paragraph and if it doesn't get to the point right away, delete it.



You're sending spam. Who's on your "To" and CC lines? Do all those people need to be there? If not, prune the list. Resist the temptation to send email for its own sake, especially in a corporate environment.



You're forwarding the whole thread. Scan the forwarded bit below your new message. Do you need to include the entire thread, dating all the way back to the invention of computers? Some context might be essential, but cut as much as possible. Otherwise, it'll feel like the recipient needs to read a novel to understand the issue.



It should be more than one email. If your email is really long, take a look and see if there are multiple action items, projects or requests included within. If so, you'll probably get a better response by sending several shorter, to the point emails.



You're not self-editing. Don't just write and click "send." Yes, you're busy, and yes, you need to send a lot of mail. But reading, thinking about and editing your email before you send it can help you trim down your messages and make them more understandable. It might also mean that those you receive back take the same attitude and make your life easier!



As ever your thoughts on what makes a bad/good email are more than welcome.



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